I grew up strong
but weaker than i used to
I was strong but never realized
This is my story
I grew up to be the most charismatic person on earth
How would you rate this poem?
@DogyBrown said [^](/forum/redirect/post/Ck5QZave)
> I grew up strong
> but weaker than i used to
> I was strong but never realized
> This is my story
> I grew up to be the most charismatic person on earth
>
>
> How would you rate this poem?
10/10
Summoning @dukedog lets see his poem too!!!
E pawn out
Knight lets out a shout
Queen does a blunder
White's elo was torn asunder
Come on guys,i thought you were my friends,only 2 people wrote to this thread
@DogyBrown said [^](/forum/redirect/post/zxiae7zI)
> Come on guys,i thought you were my friends,only 2 people wrote to this thread
Well, it's not open to discussion, so I guess I can't say anything...
i’m really not a poem person
- It's rather short, but not particularly memorable.
- There is no rhyme scheme and barely any rhythm.
- The last line is rather jarring.
Overall I'd say 4/10.
*Proceeds to open a discussion.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I saw this thread
Idk how to end it
that would make a good thread